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Crafting Fiction for Commercial Success: 2-Day Writing Intensive with Davis Bunn

Monday, December 17th, 2012

Would you like to receive writing instruction in an intimate and professional setting?

If so, I invite you to join me September 14-15, 2013 in the San Francisco Bay area for “Prose in Motion: Crafting Fiction for Commercial Success.”

This two-day intensive is sponsored by Writing for Life Workshops, the brainchild of best-selling authors Susanne Lakin and Geraldine Solon.

Their goal is to host a series of multi-day workshops on the writing craft in a venue other than a huge conference setting. They chose to host these workshops in heart of Silicon Valley, a location that offers easy access from the entire Bay region and is close to three major airports.

“Prose in Motion” will be at The Marriott Courtyard in Newark, CA.

Here’s a sneak peek of what you’ll learn:

  • How can writers craft their fiction so it sells—without selling their soul?
  • Is there a secret to fashioning a novel so it will hit the best-seller lists?

During this event for intermediate fiction writers of all genres, we’ll go deep into the technique and structure needed in your fiction to make it grab the attention of publishers and readers.

We’ll cover:

  • First line, first paragraph, first page: how to create a winning first impression
  • How to make “point of view” your ally
  • Right-brain energy: how to transform the outline process into a vital experience
  • Creating a pitch and premise that sell
  • Plotting, subplotting, and the interweaving of successful scenes
  • Upping the ante: the discipline of daily output and how to maintain the emotional and story threads
  • The three-thousand-year legacy: How understanding the Heroic structure and Post-modern story can work to your advantage
  • The wonder of three dimensions: How to create characters and dialog that leap off the page

Here is the tentative schedule for our two days together:

Class: 9:00 AM–12:30 PM
Lunch: 12:30 PM-1:15 PM (included in price)
Class: 1:15–5:00

Registration for “Prose in Motion” opens January 14, 2013 with a week-long registration and give-away of all kinds of door prizes.

The cost of the two-day workshop is as follows:

  • Early Bird rate: $315 if registered before May1, 2013
  • Early Bird rate for members of any CWC (CA Writers Club) or ACFW chapter: $295 (you must provide the name of the chapter/region you belong to) if registered before May 1, 2013.
  • Regular Rate: $350 May 1–August 31. Registration closes August 31.
  • Fees must be paid in full at the time of registration.

Your registration fee includes:

  • Two full days of writing instruction and exercises
  • lunch each day
  • registration materials (including a padfolio, pens, neck badge, and other cool items)
  • raffle tickets for the drawing to win books
  • editing services
  • chocolate and other goodies
  • all handout materials

Lodging is not included in the workshop price. Attendees must make their own room reservations at the hotel. The Marriott is offering a discounted rate to our participants of $84 a night plus tax for either/both nights of September 13th and 14th up until August 22, 2103.

Hotel Reservations – code M-P11X0E or refer to Writing for Life Workshop Room Block.

Contact either 1-800-321-2211 or 510-792-5200 to book your room.

Remember, registration opens January 14 – mark your calendar!

Book Fun Magazine Premieres — I’m Officially a Cover Boy!

Monday, October 8th, 2012


I am so honored and humbled to be featured as the cover story in the premiere issue of Book Fun Magazine (October 2012).

Book Fun is the official magazine of The Book Club Network and is THE magazine for reading groups. Their focus is on Christian publishers and authors and on family-friendly books. Subscriptions to this online magazine are free — just go to

The cover story starts on page 36, and is an interview with Nora St. Laurent. Our interview is followed by a review from Rick Estep of my novel, Rare Earth.

I hope you’ll read the story and leave a comment, below, letting me know something new you learned.

P.S. If you’re interested in learning the history behind the picture of the airplane on the cover, please read my post, “Our New Digs.”

Fun Filmwork Feedback

Friday, May 11th, 2012

Karen writes:

Thanks for the sneak peek into the world of film. You also gave us a picture of the person you are and how you are guided by God. I work at a bookstore and love recommending your books to customers especially ones who have never read your books. I have compared you to Francine Rivers another favorite author. Loved the collaboration with Janette Oke!!! Keep on writing and growing in Jesus!

Cali writes:

As an emerging writer, I found it fascinating to learn about the process of script writing.  To have the actors themselves talk to you about the characters must have been like having a character in a novel develop beyond what you expected.  It’s happened to me, as I’m sure it’s happened to you, but then to have that character displayed in a person who is telling you these things must have been amazing and surreal.

Dorothy writes:

Am so looking forward to this movie when it is out. Your books are so well received in the library where I am the purchaser and I know that there will be a lot of interest in this movie. I am also anxiously awaiting your next novel…love your writing!!

Larry writes:

Thanks so much for sharing this report with your subscribers. This is just awesome! I’m not over remembering all details of recent LION OF BABYLON and so looking forward to the new novel, RARE EARTH… However, I see what you mean about “using new tools” and it’s so interesting how God can use an author to write or even ’embed’ spiritual data/points in novels and I suppose at times the writer might not even know he did that, but by the Spirit was it so subtlety accomplished….

Barb writes:

I am amazed at how God uses us in new and different ways if we are just willing and obedient! God bless you richly – I’ll be waiting to see this one.

Dear Friends,

There have been some amazing comments on my website and emails regarding the latest blog post on my recent filmwork for Unlimited.  Thank you so much, for the wonderful and encouraging comments.  As I work to develop the novel from the screenplay—the first time I have ever worked in this order, these very warm and heartfelt comments have been a great boost. 

Thank you again for writing. 

Warmest regards,


Reader Comments on My Radio Interview with Giovanni Gelati

Tuesday, February 21st, 2012

Carolyn writes:

That was some interview Giovanni Gelati  had with you! Thanks so much for providing it for us. I surely learned a lot about your writing life, your “inner life” as you face new opportunities and challenges, the history of your writing, and Isabella’s work.

If I hadn’t listened to that YouTube piece on your daily schedule, I’d wonder too when you have time to sleep! Considering the extremely high quality of your books, I am absolutely amazed that you aim for two books a year. But I thank the Lord you do!

Your devotion to and passion for your writing are amazing–and a clear indication of the strong focus our great God has given you and maintained the past 20 years. May the era of short stories for you take a very long time in coming!

Whereas Gelati was talking in generalities, you weren’t content to answer in kind. You graciously gave him and us so much detail–about that which he brought up and that which he didn’t. That to me is a strong characteristic of your books. There is nothing superficial about that which you write. When I’ve finished one of your novels, I feel I’ve been to a feast–because you’ve GIVEN SO MUCH of your experience, your talent, and your heart!

Readers, please note, you can still hear Giovanni Gelati’s webcast.

Dear Carolyn,

It is rare these days that interviewers move away from the standard questions and delve more deeply. Giovanni certainly did that, and as a result made his interview into something I truly enjoyed and appreciated. Glad it struck a chord with you as well.

The Best Advice for Aspiring Authors: Attend a Writers’ Conference

Tuesday, January 31st, 2012

Rachel Ann writes:

I wanted to extend my appreciation and admiration of your work. I have read The Book of Hours, The Black Madonna, and The Damascus Way. All three, distinct and fresh, spoke to my heart and I thank you for writing!

I am embarking on a novel of my own; I have been writing since childhood and I also wrote a play three years ago in college. My newest work is set in the French Revolution.

Thanks again for writing and for being a godly example of what a Christian writer should be!

Dear Rachel Ann,

I wish you every success in your own creative efforts. If you would allow me to give you some advice, here is something that I feel has proven to be of benefit to a number of other aspiring authors.

The most important advice I can possibly offer a Christian author is this:

Attend one of the major Christian writers’ conferences.

Eight are listed below. I have selected these because they are large enough, and so well-established, that every major publisher and agent will attend at least one of these each year, and perhaps more.

This is a crucial component of a successful conference. Do not be swayed by one that is quicker, closer, or cheaper. You need to have the connection to the commercial world, and see your work through the eyes of those people who have the power to offer you a contract.

Christian vs. General Market Conferences

There are a number of significant differences between one of these Christian conferences and the mainstream counterparts. Most of these began as church-based ministries, and ALL of them see their work as a service to our Lord. The same is true for the teachers. We come in order to serve God and further the Kingdom’s work.

Structure of a Writers’ Conference

The days are basically split in two. In the mornings are ‘major tracks’, ongoing classes designed to cover the basic nuts and bolts of your chosen direction—fiction, non-fiction, song and poetry, magazine articles and greeting cards, and screenwriting. The afternoons are focused upon the commercial side of the writing world—meetings with agents and publishers, classes on pitching and presentations and marketing, and so forth.

Advantages to Attending

Two other advantages come from attending such a conference. The first is, you have the opportunity to discuss your work with other authors, and know what it means to translate a private dream into a commercial reality.

The second is, you are granted a set of realistic expectations and tools for change. Both of these are vital components to growth and success.

The main Christian writers’ conferences are held annually (Click the conference name to visit its website): 

Writing for the Soul Conference
Denver, Colorado
February 16-19, 2012

Florida Christian Writers Conference
Near Leesburg, Florida
March 1-4, 2012

Mount Hermon Christian Writers Conference
Near Santa Cruz, California
March 30-April 3, 2012

Northwest Christian Writers Renewal Conference
Seattle, Washington area
May 18-19, 2012

Blue Ridge Mountain Christian Writers Conference
Near Asheville, North Carolina
May 20-24, 2012

Write to Publish Conference
Wheaton College, Illinois
May 30-June 2, 2012

Oregon Christian Writers Summer Coaching Conference
Willamette Valley, Oregon
August 13-16, 2012

American Christian Fiction Writers Conference
Sept 20-23, 2012
Dallas, Texas

A Reader Asks: Where Did Davis Bunn Grow Up?

Wednesday, November 16th, 2011

Betsy Bernhardt writes:

In The Great Divide almost all of the characters’ names (not all) have double letters in either their first or last names. I find that interesting–especially since your last name does, as well.

Now, would you share with us all just exactly where in NC you grew up?

Dear Betsy,

Every now and then a reader’s question offers a surprise, and this one is another first. I have never noticed that about the names before. The powers of readers’ observations sometimes is just astonishing. We have had readers write to correct the hair color of a child in two books in a series four years apart—no I am not going to tell you which books.

As for where in NC I come from, I was born and raised in Raleigh, then did my undergraduate studies at Wake Forest in Winston-Salem. I left from there to the UK, where I did a masters in international finance, something that every novelist needs, wouldn’t you agree?

How Many Times Should an Author Redraft a Story?

Friday, November 11th, 2011

Sameh writes:

We met at the 2009 writers’ conference in Cocoa Beach, where you taught the morning sessions on fiction. I appreciate your encouragement, as thereafter I seemed to find my voice, and set out to write. I was lucky to find a great mentor, Prof. Susan Hubbard. I completed the manuscript, titled The Little Grammarian, in January of this year, and have been revising and re-revising it since.

Dear Sameh,

I am very pleased to hear you have found a good mentor and are making solid progress on your writing career.

There are elements of ‘voice’ that are only learned through extensive first drafting. Because of this, I would urge you not to make the critical error of equating your career with this first novel. It may require several stories before your internal voice is brought into harmony with the exterior demands of the publishing world.

By this I mean, do not under any circumstances feel you can REDRAFT your way into a career. You must learn to focus BEYOND this story, and see the goal as becoming a published author. Not merely the author of this work.

No doubt during your training as a psychiatrist you came across a multitude of misconceptions that, unless caught early and dealt with well, could potentially have wrecked your career. I assure you, Sameh, this is one such issue when it comes to writing. You must first draft. You must face the challenge of the empty page. You must start a new story. And you must move on.

I wish you every possible success,


Writing Mainstream Novels Does Not Require an Author to Leave His Faith Behind

Wednesday, August 17th, 2011

Linda writes:

I just wanted to write and tell you that I have so loved your books in the Acts of Faith series. They are on my favorite-books-of-all-time-shelf. What a blessing they are to me.

Then while at the Christian bookstore I saw Gold of Kings and I purchased it right away. My favorite genre of books is Christian historical fiction and you have not disappointed, until The Black Madonna. I was disappointed in the phrase, “is she your lover” referring to Storm Syrell and Emma. I could not believe that the phrase was in your book. I thought, is this the same author that has written The Centurion’s Wife?

It is so hard to find good action/adventure/history fiction that is not filled with trash and filth. There must be hundreds if not thousands of authors willing to include horrible language,

explicit sex scenes and all the rest in their books. Which makes it all the more exciting when you find an author that writes as good as you and is also willing to keep it clean and glorifying to God.

I read in the front of The Black Madonna:

“Bunn has comfortably made the transition to mainstream readers, and his popularity shows no sign of abating.”

So that must mean that you have to forgo mentioning a relationship with God by any of your characters, or include things that would not glorify God to be accepted by the mainstream. They have so very many authors to choose from and we have so very few.

I hope and pray that you will still write so that ALL of your readers will be able to continue reading and loving your books.

Dear Linda:

I must thank you for writing such an open and heartfelt note. Sometimes the hardest words to write, at least for me, are where there is such a conflict of positive and negative, things I like and things that distress me. I just want to tell you that you have done a beautiful job at expressing your joy over these stories, and your distress over this one issue.

The most important thing I have to say is, I am very sorry that you found this point distressing. The reason I wrote this as I did was simply that I wanted to portray Raphael as a member of the other world, the realm not occupied by believers, out there where such casual comments are simply part and parcel of daily life. Cold, uncaring, heartless. Everything his affection for Storm gradually rescued him from.

But whatever reason I had for writing that does not excuse the sense of having offended you, and for this I am genuinely sorry.

As for your question, no, moving into the mainstream with some of my books is not as you have said, a departure from faith-based work. Instead, what I try to do with these books is write a book founded upon faith and Scriptural morals, but where the theme is not overtly evangelical.

That is the key issue for me and a growing number of writers and film-makers, how to take our stories of eternal hope and bring them to a world that is moving ever further away from God’s voice.

In any case, I do hope you find future works of mine, both those for the mainstream and those directed to the faith world, to hold to the values which clearly form the mainstay of your own life. May they uplift, and inspire, as well as entertain.

Again, thank you so much for writing from the heart.

Warm personal regards,


Readers Ask: How Do You Come Up With Your Story Lines?

Wednesday, August 10th, 2011

Amy writes:

How do you come up with the amazing story lines–it really makes you stop and think–I wonder if that actually could have happened–keep up the great work!!

Dear Amy,

Most of the story ideas come from one of three directions.

I can have a superb concept for starting off, a character or a ‘what if’ that just ignites me. I love the ‘what if’s’ most of all.

Or I can come across the special source, or information, or bit of research, or news item that is so astonishing I have to run with it. This happened with Lion of Babylon.

And then there is the rarest of all, when I see the story, beginning to end, a climax thrown in for good measure. Just bang, the whole thing is there suspended before my eyes. The Quilt was one such book. The Meeting Place, with Janette Oke, was another.

Readers Ask: Do You Write Supernatural or Science Fiction Novels?

Monday, July 25th, 2011

I have not written such a book that has to do with the supernatural in quite some time. The only two other stories were my first published novel, The Presence, and then eight years later, The Warning.  Both were big hits.

But there is a certain responsibility that goes with fashioning a story where the supernatural holds a positive edge, that is, it forms a component of the positive outcome, rather than being part of the negative – as with most of the current works currently  both in the inspirational field and the mainstream.

I have been working on this for quite some time now, and feel I have come up with a solid concept. Thankfully, my publishers at Simon and Schuster agree.

The story is entitled, The Book Of Dreams and will be released in late October 2011.